22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3
Pitching Practice Makes Perfect
Video Link:
https://youtu.be/IHuNuqSraQE
Reflection Feedback:
On the last video I did not pay attention to my framing. I need to stay within the camera angle.
Changes made based on feedback:
One of the things that I changed in my pitch is being more interactive with waste. So you can see me picking up trash in the video. I actually took that idea from one of the videos that got feedback from our professor. The student was walking through her house showing off her pet spa idea. They video might be totally different, but it gave me another way to intrigue my customer.
I always enjoy watching your pitches because you are so upbeat and friendly with your audience. I can clearly see the applications of your feedback which I appreciate. Personally, I found it hard to apply my feedback because it was a lot more of a character change than a profession one. I am working on it, but I like how you took some inspiration from our peers because it shows that you are open to improvements and motivated to do so. Great job!
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