17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
Elevator Pitch Practice:
Thank you! for all of your feedback.
Video:
https://youtu.be/qNfBAnjxnmM
(I tried)
Taking into account:
Some of the commentary that I received was very helpful, but one comment that stood out to me. The comment suggested that I should give myself more credibility.
What did I change?
Some things that I changed was put more statistics in my pitch.Another aspect that I focused on was making sure that I stayed true to my overall goal, which is lifting the burden off of custodians.
What did I keep?
I wanted to make sure that I kept the importance of why this product is necessary, and why it's important for students should care. I also kept my slogan for the product.
Thank you! for all of your feedback.
Video:
https://youtu.be/qNfBAnjxnmM
(I tried)
Taking into account:
Some of the commentary that I received was very helpful, but one comment that stood out to me. The comment suggested that I should give myself more credibility.
What did I change?
Some things that I changed was put more statistics in my pitch.Another aspect that I focused on was making sure that I stayed true to my overall goal, which is lifting the burden off of custodians.
What did I keep?
I wanted to make sure that I kept the importance of why this product is necessary, and why it's important for students should care. I also kept my slogan for the product.
You did a great job in your pitch. I hate talking in front of people and didn't realize that doing this in front of a camera would be almost as bad. Some feedback on the video would be to make sure and not accidentally walk off screen. There were a few times where a portion of your body went off screen from the pacing. I don't think there is anything wrong with moving around a bit but more to the center will help.
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